Night in Werewolf Woods
Hello everyone.
Today I write story summary.yourself writing.like I read story and emaging.like movee, series , and real life. when I story reading then I remember every insedant like any movee, and Series or real-life stories. like one day me my friends went for a walk in the woods. I seen a wearwolf . Me and my friends very scered.beacuse woods in me and my friends were alone. And come the night. So we people
Very scered and wondering what will happen now.
like cave in happened to Todd . Todd was outside moonlight.but Todd was very scered. Some time after moonlight is closed.then Todd show in front. Sharky said no one is safe . moonlight in.so please moonlight outside is evey person safe.
after me my friends ran away
and run some distance and
Stop every people.and we are
Started laughing because e
every person is safe.
You try well but there are speeling mistakes and grammatical mistakes are also there so focus on these things. Keep it buddy. (Radha)
ReplyDeleteSaurav Kumar
ReplyDeleteYes Rani to explain quite well and she is explain everything
To like a explain to movie and web series
Good job Rani, you explain very well but you need to focus on grammar allover is very good keep it up
ReplyDeleteGood job Rani you relate it with reality very well but you need to work on your spellings and tense as well apart from this you tried well good job.keep it up!
ReplyDeletePoints and are valid good. Details and facts are acceptable. But Punctuation can be improved.
ReplyDeleteANKIT
Okk Thanks to tell my mistake....
ReplyDeleteAll the things that you wrote is very well but try to improve punctuation and grammar Part also.
ReplyDeleteSakshi