Amusement park

 My home right  side is one amusement park _

So very interesting park _like big place _ that place is very quiet place_ there are some people

Work and morning and evening _ here  coming to chidran playing the game_ amusement park in different different game. Play the children_ and 

enjoy are every day_ that place is very quiet and clean places_ our life very helpful work _like work_ 

Some people are bycicling _ some chidran are small ven.moveing_ that place is very helpful place  for every person_ so halp are good health_ so please everyone  daily routine are  going to work the park.






Comments

  1. Naaz Afroz KhanJune 13, 2021 at 8:16 PM

    Rani your story well you yes pronsation but your story is 250 words well tried

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  2. UnknownJune 13, 2021 at 8:22 PM

    You write it quite good. But you wirte ut very short it look like outline so plz try to increase it and there are some grammatical mistakes also

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  3. Payal choudharyJune 13, 2021 at 9:09 PM

    Yes rani content is quite intersting but try to avoid grammatical errors and length of story is not good you can add some more points in it.

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  4. @ Rani jhaJune 13, 2021 at 10:22 PM

    Ok thanks to seen my mistake. I will try to correct.

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  5. vaneeta Chugh June 13, 2021 at 11:41 PM

    Great Rani you have tried remarkably, but try to focus on your grammar more. And try to focus what mam is saying. Today we have to write complete story not outline.

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