Night in Werewolf Woods

  This story is very interesting ___after seven pages and end.___ cave in Todd behaviour not good___ like here there___ touched something__there was yellow eyes he Todd___was pulling himself___ some time after___todd was gone___ and  I decided ___ i find the Todd ___ so I in the cave___ I'm very scared ___but I  decided I find it Todd___ I find it __ two cave after one Was the Wolves__ I very scared. ___ I cave in but Todd is not there___ I very scread___ and cave in whenever spoke __ like two voice returns___ there was only me but voice is different different ___ and some type___  some time after Todd seen ___ but with Werewolf___  and that night was moonlight__his hand hair ghows___ and  his teeth lengths___with eyes red ___his mouth is open___ and voice is different___ like ow_ow__ Todd you shout___because that night not seen  moonlight__ Werewolf  very harmful___ don't let it get ___ you try one more time pull  your feet free___after some easy feet __ and Todd  yourself body move and  out him moonlight.

Comments

  1. Payal choudharyJune 30, 2021 at 4:52 AM

    Your way of writing is captivating moreover there are some spelling mistakes try to get rid of them.

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  2. UnknownJune 30, 2021 at 6:29 AM

    You try very well but there are some grammatical mistakes and some spellings also wrong so try to focus on it.
    Keep it up Buddy(radha)

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  3. vaneeta Chugh June 30, 2021 at 1:27 PM

    You have written a great outline Rani. Wow, I am impressed just some spelling mistakes, like scread, interesting etc., are there. Improve it, but yeah really good job. Keep it up!

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